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This is sound work - there are evident clear accounts of your planning and research for your music video production day after half term.  I

The evaluation of the animatic requires more detail - see the notes you were provided with.  If anything when you evaluate, try to add more to your comments - otherwise this looks too concise in it's approach.

There are one or two ways to develop the blog.  First to begin using a wider range of blogging tools, if you can - there are lots of well presented images, but use of Flickr or powerpoint will increase the creativity that is shown on your blog.  

Second the valid, detailed and reflective comments that you make need to be developed further with  key media concepts and theoretical ideas;  for example, link the planning to star image,  or how set design and lighting link to mise en scene and/ or what model's of lighting you are using in relation to your set - key, fill, directional, discuss the intensity and colour and what you are trying to represent about your artist.  You do this in part, but again not in enough reflective detail .

This will help make a more thorough evaluation of your work. 

Well done.